Monday, September 17, 2007

The Bourne Ultimatum


While I may agree with Richard Corliss, of TIME Magazine, that the Bourne Ultimatum is a very suspenseful movie, his review of the movie pays homage more to my 4th grade English class, than a well respected periodical. Upon reading his piece, it appears to me as if he utilizes creative writing solely because he has nothing else to say. His metaphors and analogies lack creativity and bore the reader by throwing in too many words better left unspoken.

“Eluding or dispatching bad guys, fighting off six at a time in a stairwell, wrecking more autos than in a NASCAR blooper reel.”
It would be possible for a well versed 12 year old to come up with something better than that.

If the reader is able to get past Corliss’ drab writing style, it’s easily seen why he is a writer for TIME, a plain conservative magazine: he has an excellent point of view. He comes up with terrific ideas, and truly demonstrates to the reader that he knows what he talking about. Looking at Greengrass’ directorial decisions Corliss makes a seemingly well educated conclusion about Greengrass’ camera choice.

“[He has defined] Bourne location work as guerrilla filmmaking — using concealed cameras in "wild" situations — and he overuses the hand-held shaky-cam to shout, visually, that this is all real, man!”
He uses information given to The Art of Film students in their first few weeks of school excellently, basically giving word for word what shaky-camera shots are used for.

Corliss is able support his ideas with numerous examples of other films which, like the Bourne Ultimatum, are so suspenseful make it hard for the view to breath during the course of the movie. Tying this movie into two other of action dynasties, Bond and Die Hard, Corliss puts Bourne with other quintessential action heros. He writes,

“That's the secret of [Bourne], and Bond and John McClane and all the other action-movie studs. They are a projection of American power — or a memory of it, and the poignant wish it could somehow return.”
As many millions have seen the Bond and Die Hard films, Corliss is able to demonstrate the true determination and mastery of combat Jason has.

Although he has in my opinion one of the most uninteresting writing styles out there, this review is still a success. It makes the reader want to go and spend 8 dollars on a ticket plus popcorn to truly experience the movie.
“A pounding of the eyes and ears (John Powell's score is all urgent percussion), the movie is one continuous, exhausting, exhilarating chase.”
Making it seem as if my simple 42 incher and Dolby 5.1 surround sound system won’t be able to capture the epic nature of this film.

After giving the reader a sense of the pure unadulterated action that unfolds during the movie, Corliss casually touches on Damon’s portrayal of this invisible agent, by saying that his acting is what in effect makes Bourne invisible to the C.I.A and a hero to the viewer.




6 comments:

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Anonymous said...

I just want to point out that while you are critiquing the critic for using extended and colorful metaphors; you use some pretty awful analogies as well. “…his review of the movie pays homage more to my 4th grade English class, than a well respected periodical,” and “It would be possible for a well versed 12 year old to come up with something better than that,” to mention a few. Pwnd.
-DON

Konner Johnson said...

Yo! I thought your review was really good, especially about how the director had a unique ways of filming to keep you in constant suspence. You also had some knarley anologies!

Moon Unit said...

Hahah elliot never a dull moment when it comes to you. I didn't read the actual review of the movie that you did this on, but I would be willing to bet that your review of it was much better. Liked how you formed a strong oppinion about the review rather than just saying "this review was really helpfull" or something lame like that.

Ryne said...

I have not nor do I really want to see the Bourne Ultimatum, especially after the horrid review that you have described. I watched the first 2 and didn't know what was going on in them and don't want to be lured into the same confusion with this movie. Thank you kind sir for allowing me to spend time watching other movies.

Mr. K said...

Elliot: Wow, jack-e-chan nailed you. Ouch. Anyway, I did think you spent a little too much time attacking the style of the reviewer and not dealing enough with the substance of the review itself. When you did discuss the content, you were insightful, as in the comments about the hand-held cameras. You've got a strong, unique voice -- keep it up.